Luna_Frost_20
Where fantasies prevail...
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The story is intriguing and makes me feel like I am watching an incarnation anime but with better details. Honestly, good job author! It kind of lures you(reader) in....
Sure, will do that!
The confusion is quite overwhelming at start but it blends nice after a while. If you could keep the information releasing at a pace little slower it would help the reader to go smoothly with the story line. Other than that, the writing is really good and loved the way you showed the story.