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Kyrell

Kyrell

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2022-07-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    Great work! I love how every character is unique and you made it your own. There are a few grammar mistakes but overall the story is really good. Keep it up!

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    I don't know how to reach everyone so this seemed fair. Thank you to everyone for the kind words who have read House of Shadow and hopefully will continue to read it. It's greatly appreciated and keeps me going. Thank you!

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Replied to Aira_Rin

    Thank you!!

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    So far I’ve read all the free chapters and it’s really good. For me it started off slow but nothing to draw my attention away. I’m not to big on romance but after reading some of it, it hooks you in. Keep up the good work.

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    Yeah sooo this is amazing. I‘M not too big on romances but this is my cup of tea. The character are great and the world is great. I love this!

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    It is pretty good. It definitely catches your attention. I look forward to more and seeing where you go with Dante. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    I'm not much of a romance reader but this one, I liked it. I didn't catch up fully yet but I intend soon. It was great pacing and intense. Definitely worth the read and I'll be adding to my collection.

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Replied to AKHIL_GOYAL

    A little help, if you are writing on laptop there is a free program called Grammarly that will help you with editing

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    Overall, this was a pretty good piece of work. I did enjoy reading this. There are some grammatical errors but nothing to throw off the story. Keep writing please, I'm definitely following.

  • Kyrell
    Kyrell2 years ago
    Posted

    The story is good. There are some grammatical errors but overall the plot is interesting. I enjoy it for the most park. The no quotation marks is different but it works. Overall, good work