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Well, 29 chapters in I’ve been enjoying the story a lot well done solid four stars. I’m not good at bringing it down further I just know what I like and I’ve been enjoying the story. Keep up the fucking good work author ✍️

Hahaha 🤣 love the user name great game love it

I always appreciate the longer chapters and chapter names are not really necessary. They can be nice and funny if used properly but not necessary you just do you do the story you feel like 👍

It’s kind of saddening that that needs to be explained lol

OK, I just gotta say I really do enjoy your book but there’s bullshit of increasing the price. This much is crap and this keeps up. I am dropping this book because this bullshit playing paying 10 coins or one fast pass. A chapter is fine but 20 coins or two fast pass chapters is a little bullshit, really am enjoying your story and would like to continue

I’m enjoying your story keep up the good work, but which with that last short chapter was way too short seemed almost like it’s missing some

What is up with your short chapters? Are you only uploading part of chapters? For some reason? Seems like I’m missing content from one chapter of the next.

I’m enjoying your story keep up the good work only Complaint your latest chapters are very short

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola