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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Répondu à Drei05

    i just read the first chapter and the story is interesting. i like your cover too.

    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantaisie · Drei05
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Répondu à Arlemit

    i read the first chapter and wow!

    Nameless King
    Fantaisie · Arlemit
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
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    [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] this romance story is well written, i like the female characters, the conflict needs development, and i want to know if the ending will be sad or happy

    Story close
    Sports, voyage et activités · Account_nolonger
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Répondu à Account_nolonger

    Thank you for taking the time to read[img=recommend]

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
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    I read the first chapter, and I knew this would be a great story. I like the way the author explains it. The story flows and builds well. Only a minor grammatical error, but overall excellent work!

    I'm an Automaton, That's Right!
    Fantaisie · NAF12
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Répondu à aleksandra_pano10

    thanks for your honest review :)

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
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    great story and i like MC and genres like this. nice writing style but need little improvement about punctuation, the paragraph long, and the number of words per chapter is also comfortable to read,

    My throne
    Histoire · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
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    you have great story and i like the MC character. But for dialogue, you need to put " between it. keep writing!

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    My throne
    Histoire · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Commenté

    great story

    Ch 4 Third Phoenix Clan
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Commenté

    i like it. keep writing!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Endless Dào
    Endless Dao
    Oriental · Heartless_Qi_
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