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I quite like where this story is going. I think it can do better in various aspects, like descriptions or details, but I can't say much since I myself wouldn't know how to do better. As for free ideas, only comes to me adding some friendly animal characters; I believe you already set the base for it. I'll follow your work closely, as long as I can. good job!