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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971mth
    Répondu à NewComer714

    I would say 3 is perfect but no more are needed the side woman you could skip then you could add he's kids I like the story really good I am gonna keep reading it just voicing my opinion lots off potential

    Ch 46 Consideration and another one
    Godfather System
    Films · NewComer714
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971mth
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    Great fanfic and translate much better then the original i hope you finish it and end it with lord of the rings only I am seriously thinking about your patreon but I really don't want to pay only for you to drop it later I you have the intent to finish this and do some other fics I will join keep up the good work can't wait for more. love lotr

    Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
    Films · Ax_nevermay_cry
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12975mth
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    I like your idea but don't burn out take your time and focus on the one you started plisd

    Ch 36 Not a chapter.
    Saiyan in Warhammer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SrDevoxero
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12975mth
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    Good so far keep it up since the Mc is op you can go into kingdom building and politics for more story and maybe harem with 1 to 3

    Ch 8 Adjucas ... you're strong
    Limitless Flame
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Cedric_7512
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12975mth
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    Great keep it going pliss don't drop there lots off lore to the 40k universe and now you got dragon ball in it to so lots off stuff to go on[img=recommend]

    Ch 22 Teach Us.
    Saiyan in Warhammer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SrDevoxero
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    So far so good it's one of the best fanfiction for cyberpunk and there hard to find. I like the nano suit make him a crisis nano suit that would be awesome

    Ch 19 David goes ‘Loka’.
    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
    Anime et bandes dessinées · BeaulenSmith2
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    Hello Great story pliss don't drop its one of the best fanfictions on web novel. And once you catch up with the anime story you can go into the game story with some changes of course since the anime took part in 2076 from my understanding so keep it up and give them that happy ending

    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
    Anime et bandes dessinées · BeaulenSmith2
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    Thanks for the chapter it was great and the characters developed nicely its been a long journey and all I have to say is it is a great story one of the best fanfiction I have read keep it up don't drop I know it's hard

    Ch 171 Chapter 171 - Vol. 3 - Chapter 36
    Saharan Successor
    Livres et littérature · Vostarian
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    Hi thanks for the chapter I been enjoying it I got some tips for the harem part like my last comments don't make the girls useless make them good at something like for example amata she is no a figther do the power armor is a good idea for her but can't have do nothing so she is the daughter of the líder of the vault make her good a management or stuff so she can help Mc whe he has a faction over multiple bases

    Ch 17 Chapter 24 First Night
    Fallout Wastelander
    Jeux vidéo · PowerArmorGuy
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    Hello again good chapter I was thinking maybe later in in the story if it is possible create your on faction and later on when fallout 3 is done maybe take your faction to new vegas be fun just an idea. New Vegas takes place 4 years after fallout 3 soo time wise it's perfect Por building a proper faction

    Ch 1 Chapter 12 Long Awaited Discussion
    Fallout Wastelander
    Jeux vidéo · PowerArmorGuy
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    Good I am liking it a lot hope you don't drop it try not to make a massive harem pliss maybe 5 to 6 more than That Is just a Pokémon harem.need more world explanation like how do pantheon work. maybe make them like in DC

    Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
    Anime et bandes dessinées · KasiCair
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    You could add other pov like his father or amata soo the vault doesn't feel empty and the romance too just giving ideas I like this a lot its ard to find good fallout fanfiction and this is good soo far gotta to be careful and don't make him too op and don't nerf him too much gotta keep the balance jaja and the people around him can get hurt if his too op. can go into settlement building soo much potential just keep writing take your time and pliss don't drop

    Ch 2 Chapter 11 Catch A Ride
    Fallout Wastelander
    Jeux vidéo · PowerArmorGuy
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  • Nathan_1297
    Nathan_12971yr
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    Hello pliss don't drop hard to find good fallout content you have a good idea too, should make it a #kingdom building tag or the sort don't make the harem to massive 3 to 4 is fine its no Pokémon flesh out the characters, go into base building aspect of the game Don't make Mc too good or too evil should look out for himself and family can't trust to many people in the wasteland jaja, keep up the good work

    Fallout Wastelander
    Jeux vidéo · PowerArmorGuy
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