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Great fanfic and translate much better then the original i hope you finish it and end it with lord of the rings only I am seriously thinking about your patreon but I really don't want to pay only for you to drop it later I you have the intent to finish this and do some other fics I will join keep up the good work can't wait for more. love lotr
Hi thanks for the chapter I been enjoying it I got some tips for the harem part like my last comments don't make the girls useless make them good at something like for example amata she is no a figther do the power armor is a good idea for her but can't have do nothing so she is the daughter of the líder of the vault make her good a management or stuff so she can help Mc whe he has a faction over multiple bases
Hello again good chapter I was thinking maybe later in in the story if it is possible create your on faction and later on when fallout 3 is done maybe take your faction to new vegas be fun just an idea. New Vegas takes place 4 years after fallout 3 soo time wise it's perfect Por building a proper faction
You could add other pov like his father or amata soo the vault doesn't feel empty and the romance too just giving ideas I like this a lot its ard to find good fallout fanfiction and this is good soo far gotta to be careful and don't make him too op and don't nerf him too much gotta keep the balance jaja and the people around him can get hurt if his too op. can go into settlement building soo much potential just keep writing take your time and pliss don't drop
Hello pliss don't drop hard to find good fallout content you have a good idea too, should make it a #kingdom building tag or the sort don't make the harem to massive 3 to 4 is fine its no Pokémon flesh out the characters, go into base building aspect of the game Don't make Mc too good or too evil should look out for himself and family can't trust to many people in the wasteland jaja, keep up the good work