FellowDaoistShit

very amusing, what an original concept

this isn't suitable for a book, it is more like a screenplay for a TV show, that doesn't mean it's bad, just that it is in the wrong format. Like each chapter could be a season of growth and vitality to be expanded upon and such. 5 stars.

if possible I would have rated this lower. For a book that is supposedly based on anti ntr, the Mc is so weak as a character that he is sending out cuck vibes and bitching and moaning about his mom and the book even refers to his mother with a sexual undertone. loving and being openly compassionate as a man doesn't mean that the character acts emotional in every sentence. it means the Mc acts to show his love and occasionally says 'I love you' not sobbing about how mommy and daddy didn't love the Mc. Also having a character being anti ntr implies grit, quality of character, maybe even morals not fucking his mother silly. anti ntr makes an implication that the Mc has a tragic backstory which this book doesn't display or allude to he just transmigrates and serves a perverted god which is a cuck thing to do.

This series was interesting in the beginning but the Mc was only a megasimp who had everyone turn their backs on him. Reasonably he would become cold, bitter, innately angry and in this story he is just a fucking cuck that simps for a chick that left him because of plot reasons and now their relationship is about to rekindle. This is total bullshit instead of a cold, cruel mafioso member we get a manchild that never matured and while yes he is a young adult, most kids in his situation or in a similar situation mature faster, expecting less from people and only have disdain for humanity. This is not a good story, in fact it is just cliches posing as a story. All in all you should not read this story if you do not want an infuriatingly incompetent mc

it should have been more explosive

I swear to the Allah if he becomes more of a simp

I will be honest, after Lysander becomes a women I lost interest. There was no need for this 'plot' twist. It adds no value to the story.

There are frequent grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, however that isn't the worst part. After chapter 133 or so it drastically changes the story. Instead of fang Chen we get Jian. instead of the martial spirits cultivation system, we get the usual core formation and nascent soul cultivation system. It's like the author accidentally switched up projects and pasted the wrong book.