so far so great, everything is fireeee, cant wait for what comes next, this i promise to follow to the ver very end. it has all the qualities of a great novel and should be in everyones lib

wow!! just wow!! 11 out of 10 on the start

this is a work of art, just a chapter but, DAMN!! This is what writing is all about, capturing our attention from the very beginning, a pat for this Mr. Little Author, hope this goes spreads out throughout the novel.