What was mc surname again or there wasn't any. I have some feelings that mc and this woman has some kind of relationship.

Try to edit after proofread because some paragraph feels too complicated with many commas and it's not comfortable to read and not only for me but I am sure many people will find same problem.

This chapter did you used ai for proofreading

Thank good someone talked about these reviews like wtf almost all are fake reviews. Nowadays webnovel shows how many chapters we read at the time of review but most of them are saying I recommend this book because I read like wtf

Have you even read this? I am just asking because you are saying you recommend this book. If you would have read it would have shown how many chapters you have read.

I really feels chapters are short 🥲

I know

Did you say Amon

Zephyr meaning wind right

Bro go on browser and search something visual it's much better than imagination

I am sorry I opened wrong novel

Author both novel lives on plot armour. So I don't think there will be any changes

It literally shows that they are two entities. I don't I am being over frustrated on this but you could have written in a better way.

Last chapter you said they are a single entity in my comment I asked but tbh you could have written better way i think it literally looks like bhairav is taking over jash body and they are both different entity. I feel bad.

First I will say it is a great novel. And it's my one of the favourite Eastern fantasy novels only if you are able to endure first Pagoda arc and little bit of kingdom building arc that is second arc but they are not problem it's just author was new i think so heade many mistakes and plot holes. I don't much about review but I will write my things. Here are good things that are in novel. - Mc is good like not some kind of cliche hero saving beauty type. - He always sees his benefit that's why it's name is fate emperor although he is not controlling his fate. -One of the best thing that it is a single heroine. - Not a single side character got forgotten. Authors shows evryone growth. -It has great romance with great world building. - There are some parodies of other novels in a funny way. - Brotherhood described at best. -Lore is great like one of the best. What I don't like. -There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes in start after it was good but started this problem in middle again. -Mc is level one and his enemies are level 100 so it would be good if author don't show them early on or give mc boost because my small heart can't take so much suspense. Like in recent chapter. - It becomes boring means still good and readable but mc character becomes little bit after he became emperor. -In recent chapters he makes many mistakes and don't learn from them like his greed taking over him making him completely different personality what he was before he became emperor. But I think this can be improved. And lastly thank you for this Great work author.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

If it's same person it would have been good with only perspective but now here looks like two different personalities. And it looks like bhairav took over jash happy life or maybe i skipped some parts.

lin yu family is low level i think like how you described in start and it doesn't even feel like mc is here villain or maybe my vision is bad. mc literally feels like a cliche protagonist who will overcome even if world is against him