Newtothisapp

Never. He’s still a cowardly loser

If you the novel instead of focusing only on the author like the loser meat rider you are, you’d know that the MC’s behavior stays the same way longer than a chapter.

Yes, this coming from the guy who delete’s negative reviews is very impactful.

Grow some balls, loser. Your story is $h!t, so you delete negative reviews.

1. The main character signs a contract without reading it. 2. The main character lets his sister and her boyfriend forcefully enter his apartment, and yet he doesn't call the police. 3. The main character threatens his sister and her boyfriend, only for him to not follow up on thst threat at all. 4. The main character saves his sister. You know, 'the one who abused him for years. 5. The MC loses his v!rginity to his sister right after seeing her ride her boyfriend, which obviously points out to him being voyeur. Overall, the story is trash. Guess this review doesn’t really matter in the end since the author has deleted every other negative review. (Also. I know for a fact that he deletes reviews since I’ve seen two posted already, and yet they were nowhere to be seen a few hours later.

Traaaaash. The MC is filled with hatred, going on about how he’ll never forgive the girl who t0rtured, and c**ked him in thousands of past lives, and then he instantly simps over her right after the time skip.

Overall, the MC is an idiot. He protects the people who abused him up to his death, and then after he gets revenge, it was alright, but him slipping up, and saying that his sisters were “mine” was extremely cringe, and ultimately, my dropping point.

What is this trash? The grammar is bad, the story is bad, everything is just trash. Also, the title is completely misleading. King? What king? The MC is just a loser who listens to his mommy’s every word, and lets his servant order him around.

Honestly, somehow, your story got worse and worse, especially the chapter where he meets the other universe’s Barry’s dad. It disgusts me that he completely replaced his real dad with some random guy.

Do you plan on making Hajime a single virgin? If you did, that would be cool since he always gets a girlfriend somehow in other fanfics even when he doesn’t fall in the labyrinth. I never understood that. Hajime definitely wouldn’t get a girlfriend if he stayed the way he was. No only was he lazy, he was an otaku as well. Not a good mix.