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Just great, would be a 5 star but so far I am unsure how well the update stability is

Honestly over all a great fic, but not my cup of tea. Too much Harry screen time for a fic where the MC is a squib. Also I looked ahead on Patreon and 120chs in and still in first year of Harry's Hogwarts year.

Fantastic, only problem is update stability. Otherwise couldn't be a better novel

Terrible, I couldn't read more than a few chapters. It's pure wish fulfillment, which isn't bad, but it's done in a terrible way. He tells someone he just met about his abuse, and then the character feels bad for him. I can already tell how the novel is going to end up. I don't need to read more.

Honestly kinda boring, just another drama fanfiction. not really any magic at all so far which is a bad sign considering, he's spent "4.5 years" at this point practicing magic.

Well written, but honestly too much writing. I get it's supposed to be a slow paced story, but damn is it slowwww. Chapter 71 and barely anything has happened. Maybe it get gets better later, but I am gonna stop reading here. Comes across more as a Drama than Fantasy in my opinion

Translation is good, MC hasn't changed anything in the original HP fanfic at all. Basically he just hops in and does everything for them. as of now it's the start of the 3rd year. Story doesn't go into the magic system all that much. Not much Chinese propaganda here, but there is some. Try to be mysterious about MCs abilities which is annoying because I want more detail on how he uses his magic

lol

I don't write reviews often, but this novel is both good and bad. The system itself is pretty good. it's not overpowered and offer a path for fast advancement should Harry work hard enough. The AI on the other hand is the worst part of this story. I noticed that anytime it comments on what Harry is doing, which is a lot, it always starts out with "Ah, Trying to flirt now are we?" That's not a real sentence in the story but it's all, ah this and ah that. It's not even funny most of the time, just a space waster. Found myself just skipping over the AI dialouge. The second worst thing about this novel is the attempt at making it with intrigue and manipulation. It more comes across as Harry wanting something and everyone else thinking Harry has a good point and doing it. Which follows with the AI commenting how masterful he is at manipulation and scheming. From what I've read he really isn't.

The author made a comment on a previous chapter that they weren't going to include universes with more Earth's in it. Which is kinda sad because I also want Stargate to be in the novel