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well , I was stacking chaps , but noticed that the story ended . Nice work author :3

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yea . it's pretty good tbh I'd say the story is pretty unique and I would read just for it alone .

Narcy this chapter : "I can fix her"

narcy: unleashed talk no jutsu *very effective

I did quit reading this shortly after making that comment . 10 chaps is just taste testing uk . as for why i tried it , I like villain genre or even anti hero/villain kind of novels , just need some plot , not recurring ones with recurring cliche, so yea dropped .I'm not discouraging anyone since for a first timer , this could be interesting but not for me ig

ngl this whole body swapping arc was a bad idea . forced drama , it's not even MCs body , no depth in character especially the villain Amara . i may have skipped 1 or 2 chapters but it didn't have anything going on .

yep and unlike mimir she's not smart either . so not even good for the narrator role . ❤️‍🩹