Thank you very much for the comment, I'll make sure to upload it regularly!

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Author, just a small suggestion, take this with a grain of salt, but I think Julien's reason here is a bit weak, as he is potentially sacrificing himself to save Leon to not look like a fraud, which seems a bit far-fetched.

I think you meant, 'reliving the moment.'

👍, keep up the good work.

Author, beware of modern slang in an old-fashioned fantasy, for example, the word, 'Ya'll,' doesn't seem to fit the context.

Vane's eyes during metamorphosis.

Metamorphosis.

Granar approaches Vane.

The tree trunk is wider

Vane uses the system.

Vane spots the arrow.

Vane is awakened.

I urge the reader to comment on the chapter comments, rather than the paragraph comments, as my novel is subject to editing often.

3, imagine it being reinforced with wooden planks and rusting sheet metal

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