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vedant_khandait

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2022-06-25 JointGlobal
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait2mth
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    Story's very nice but where is the mentality of the MC at, he got gamers mind which should have removed his naive ness also you made him kill like a million people in the illusion so i think he should be more desensitized to killing. But overall the story's fantastic and one of the better ATG fanfics I've read

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 : White Tiger Trial Final
    Human Of Rise In Against The Gods
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Akasaki_Ryujin
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait6mth
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    Streamer in the Omniverse
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Calleum_Artori
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait10mth
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    very nice book hoping for more chapters and regular updates

    Marvel Mutant in DC
    Anime et bandes dessinées · superman1265789
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait1yr
    Commenté

    what does this even mean?! cant you just write "Demonic" or are you Chinese

    Black Magic: 9 (The Demon King Comes to Earth)
    Hogwarts: The Way of the Dharma (Harry Potter)
    Livres et littérature · Big_Big_0235
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait1yr
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    i dont understand the refrences in this chapter and can you please aske someone to proofread your chapters

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
    Hogwarts: The Way of the Dharma (Harry Potter)
    Livres et littérature · Big_Big_0235
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait1yr
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    The story is good but the pacing is a bit fast and the power scaling of the MC is broken. Like who has so many 1mil yrs spirit rings and the other characters are also broke but manageable

    Douluo Dalu System
    Livres et littérature · The_Virgin
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