Kicks111

The author has created an interesting story, with a clear path to increasing the main characters power. Although I have to ask, will the main character get access to the ten tail form? It would essentially be a god/demi-god form.

The author keeps deleting the old chapter when they post a new chapter, which makes the story difficult to follow. recently the author deleted most of the chapters, essentially restarting.

Will Jordan get a reward from his system for defeating the elite 4 and the champion?

There is actually a pretty good reed richards reincarnation story that started recently called superior reed richards.

The author has not posted in sever months, so the story is most likely dead. the story was decent, some parts were difficult to understand due to a potential language barrier.

Author hasn't posted in a while, starting to wonder if he/she quit posting.

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I am surprised that he did not save his mother (Demeter) from the Egyptian gods. also there should be other abandoned gods/goddesses/titans that he could potentially recruit from various pantheons

It is a good fanfiction, the main problem is the author does not post very often if at all. I have been looking for fanfictions with similar systems, but haven't found any yet. please recommend some.

This is an interesting novel, the main problem for me is that it seems like that english is not the authors first language. I think witch was used in 3 different ways, from a female magician to a natural born to a witcher.