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  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer6 days ago
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    Good..............................................................................................................................................................

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer2 months ago
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    mc is not a villain ................................................................................................................................................................

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer3 months ago
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    MC is not a villain, he helps strangers without getting anything in return............................................................................

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer5 months ago
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    woman's waist?

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer6 months ago
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    I liked the story, the only bad thing is the number of chapters and the delay to be released. ...............................................

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer6 months ago
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    Author tries to create moments of tension where there is no time for it, an example of this is the MC facing opponents who are strong for his base form, but in his oozaru form would be easily resolved.

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer6 months ago
    Répondu à cosmos1

    Can you tell me if he continues to help strangers without getting anything in return? In chapter 52 he helps a boy who lost his mother and the boy has nothing to offer, doing that in the apocalypse is the same as killing himself, so I would like to know if he continues with this so as not to waste my time anymore.

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer6 months ago
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    I used Goolde Translator so there may be errors. I'm currently reading the Chinese version and to get stressed about these communists it's very easy, in chapter 52 mc helps a random boy who lost his mother, the mc offers him food and helps him without anything in return, not to mention that this boy is dead weight . I recommend that you change these facts and make a darker and more calculating protagonist (he really makes a villain), without helping random people unless you get something in return, based on these changes you could make your own fanfic, since from what I'm seeing MC tends to get worse.

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer7 months ago
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    Very good fanfic so far, i hope for more chapters and i hope for a darker mc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

  • GodPisLayer
    GodPisLayer8 months ago
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    I liked it a lot, I hope for more chapters. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]