Winter_Whisperer
No sound in the air, No cry, no prayer, Just the stillness of the end, A silence none can bear. The world fades to a hush, A final, gentle crush, Death’s embrace so quiet, In white, it calls to us.
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I don't mind the harem genre, but it gets a bit boring when the main character ends up with every female character. It would be nice to see male characters with their own love interests and relationships. I also prefer stories that don't sideline male characters and only focus on the MC and the girls. It's not about Ichigo being powerful or weak; it's more about having a balanced and diverse representation in the story.
Now that I think about it, What was she doing during the Dvalin fight? in Canon I mean. I haven't unlocked her story quest yet.
10 is fine. But i do have a concern. The potential retaliation from other faction, namely the norse and the hindhu pantheon attacking others who were left behind. Miyako and Ichigo must be protected at all costs. I have a feeling Ichigo will die. And I don't want that.
I did not know she was capable of that. Cute.
I appreciate your writing style. I recently read your Harry Potter fanfiction, and I believe that it is put together quite neatly. In my opinion, more careful planning of the stories could enhance the quality. Keep up the good work tho. I'm currently following your work, so I have high expectations for your future stories.
I reviewed this when it was around f 3 chapters long, I previously gave it five stars thinking it had an interesting concept. But reading it now it is just a carbon copy of the original just with some minor changes that aren't relevant. There are some plotholes as well. Bit disappointed, expected a lot from this fic and the author. Maybe a rewrite could fix it but with the way it is, I don't recommend anyone to read this. Just watch the original, it is better.
Because I have a memory of a goldfish I have no recollection of why I dropped the previous iteration. I believe it was due to the pacing. Slow burn is nice and all but a healthy balance is needed for it to be equally engaging. I'm enjoying the current work very much. Just wished I discovered it a bit later so there would be more to read.
it...wasn't obvious to me. Am I just dumb?
I have a feeling it's just to prevent Kenshin from seeing Celestia.
Reborn as a Skypean is the first story, connected to Cursed Gamer, which is then connected to Eternal Samsara. Each of these stories is great as a stand-alone, but together they create this amazing hyperverse. As far as I know, his "One Thrust" novel is not connected to this hyperverse. Maybe it is but there isn't any reference that I have taken notice of yet.
Rival mean they are kinda equal. Someone as prideful as him won't admit to that.
Didn't Reach the top 3 huh? sad. need more chapters