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bro why delete chap, give more chaps
bro over reliant on system by both mc and story
bro can't find new novel
bro i think u should erase certain elements otherwise this story will not be well received .
i think i sort of misunderstood they are para comments
bro did u check ur previous paragraph comments , i kinda mentioned the errors
you are too slow
I can help u correct these grammatical errors
bro are u perhaps writing and translating this novel
i think we are missing some kind of political drama of slice of life
hello
dude I like this novel write more chapters , don't make this novel pay up novel .
no need for he after those
deeds not dead
word mistake
bro u are u using Hari for hurry
create not great
do u have any plan of making this novel pay up novel
u should try make it a international event
I am waiting for drama between sushila and Ashoka ,the story is repeating the same sequence