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The same tired and overused plot of every LOTM fanfic, the mc spawns in the middle of nowhere and is somehow discovered by either ASG (Adam), Evernight or any other sequences 0 god, who for some reason don't question the absurd acts of the main character and his strange pathways, then they dissappear in the background until they're needed later. Author just tell me if this fic also has romance/Harem so I can drop it now.
Advice for the author: If you're targeting the villainous mc audience, you should re write this chapter, letting that marine go is a huge red flag for most.
He let him go???? where tf is his arrogance coming from? any captain or rear admiral from the marines can wipe the ground with him, sigh I hope it's just a sick trick from the mc and he will end him the next chapter, bc if he really let him go right now while he's still in his growing phase that will be beyond stupid.
If this is another unfinished revenge story where the mc forgives his killers tell us from now author, I already saw some red flags but I hope I'm just over thinking stuff, is this romance/harem by the way I hope not.
Conflict Angel? ?? Do you mean God of combat when he was still an angel? this definitely is a translation
Lawyer *
Most of the abilities used by the mc in this chapter belongs to the spectator (Visionary) pathway sequence 9, a seer can't read body language from my understanding (you can check the LOTM wiki), a seer can't copy human behavior or control his subconscious manners (a sequence 8 clown can but not seq9 seer), also you need to use more abilities from different pathways that fit each situation, for example a seq 9 arbitrar and a layer can use their abilities to gather information and influence people more efficiently by using their charisma and brainwash abilities that they gain at sequence 9.
The mc is wayyyyyy too innocent and naive but I understand because he's still young, hopefully he will grow to understand human nature more in the future, but for now it's good enough I just hope the author doesn't force ridiculous situations for "Character development".
Nice
Was searching for villain mc fanfics and original works using the villain tag.