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His personality is a possibility that Harry could have had and I like it.

Hope he sticks with this

Being untouchable for 5 minutes is in no way as good as summoning meteors, reviving people, absorbing chakra or controlling gravity and that’s like half what the rinnegan can do. Kamui is good but just no.

Decent translations, and mc does indeed keep evolving.

This is a good avatar fanfic, good grammer and its a bit on the darker side of the fire nations actions but make sense it’s good so far.

What is actually going on in China cuz this is crazy.

So he’s stupid, he didn’t actually change anything just made two people to save, that’s not values it’s arrogance.

I really like the concept of the story and how its written, the mc, the pacing, the plot besides Danzo.

Decent story, a bit slow paced Good translation

This is a good translation and a good fic.