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why is it so exciting 🫠🫠

hey there this is stan , you no.1 fan , good chapter man

disappointing

ohmo , i didnt know

Hi Author, I appreciate your effort, but I feel the story could use some improvement. It seems a bit rushed and inconsistent. The protagonist feels overpowered, yet they don’t use their abilities effectively. Perhaps you could focus on giving them just one or two powers and exploring those in depth. Alternatively, if they’re meant to be very powerful, consider showing them dominating their challenges in a way that feels earned. Also, please check for grammatical errors to improve readability. Keep up the hard work!

what are you doing author, why are you so evil?

Author is not consistence. maybe consider rebooting the fan fic

After reading this novel, i am giving my review(i am not complaining i am just writhing what i found about this novel when i red thought all the available chapters ). It has a good concept(eternally regressing knight), MC is cunning and clever("this is the selling point of the story"), Good story and interaction with background character, the down point of the story is after some point it feels like the main concept of the story is not being explored much.(example, when he dies and come back to life, he is able to survive that death with ease, it didnt happen at the start but when he killed that cloud jonin it felt like that situation could have been explored more. ) Overall its a good story.