Kyatus

He is thinking of both. There is an advantage to performing well in this next match against the pro players. One of which is a better rating in the system which then grants him more rewards after the match.

Great chapter. But I would recommend editing it so it isn’t just one massive paragraph. Because it is hard to read in the current format.

The closest thing we have gotten is that they are researching Quirk evolution. And just strong quirks in general.

Really good concept. I like the MC. But the grammar is just god awful. Even compared to other MTL’s it is pretty bad. I literally had to stop reading because of how bad it was even though I like the concept. Also the interactions of the characters is strange. They don’t feel real.

This story is pretty interesting and the main character is cool. But I just don’t like how much stronger he is than everyone else. By chapter 25 the author says that he destroy the gods with a slap of his hand. That just really gets rid of any intrigue and tension with the story as you know that the MC is just so far above it all. I just wish that the mic developed slower. A good example of power progression in the Percy Jackson universe would be the Prince of the Underworld story by shadowmonarch he also has a character stronger than the others in the story but it feels believable and his goal makes it fine.

Very nice Short story. TFTC

This is the first time I have seen this kind of approach to this night in a naruto fic. It’s really unique.

I don’t know if I am too late but one thing I have kept imagining him having is a time stop. Due to him seeming to always try to live in the moment to me at least.

This is a translation thing. He isn’t saying that the ship was designed specifically for him. He is saying that Vegapunk has already designed the idea of a ship like this so he can just create a ship.

The concept seems neat but it just runs into a roadblock that I have seen many times before in writing. You are trying to connect us emotionally to the character and his struggles when we don’t care about him yet. We don’t know him. So we can’t connect. At least I can’t which just makes these emotional scenes written in the first few chapters just feel weird to read.