Thefantastictouch

Just a chap of massive info dump hurg! hope it ́s not the same in the next chapter

Isn’t it a bit too quick for romance ?

I like the duke's attitude so much!

Ten chapters and I can’t read this anymore. It’s just too tedious to go through and the ideas are not so original that I would want to stick . Good points : - The grammar is okay - The reason for the transmigration is stated and not thrown aside - The mc’s goal is stated early enough Bad points : - The pace is slow and the writing style is so plain that it’s hard to care about what happens. - The ideas are not executed in a unique enough way and even the transmigration reason is a bit cliche - The mc doesn't seem to have any personality ( I'm sorry but no. One doesn’t need to read hundreds of chapters to get an mc’s Persona. When a book is really well written , the first two to three chapters are enough to reveal your mc’s personality. ) - For someone who loved his sister so much I think the Mc didn’t try enough to look for ways to be reunited with her( don’t know if it’s still the case in the future chapters though.) - The plot doesn’t seem all that promising May God help you with your next book author.

Sir please have mercy!🤣

Can someone remind me how old he is mentally?🤨

I'm dropping this book. But not for the reasons one would expect. In fact , the story is well-written . The characters I have seen so far( except Amelia) are interseting( even elizabeth’s adopted children), the plot is slowly uncovering and the aventure promises to be exciting! But that said , this book just has too many pet peeves of mine for me to be willing to continue. First , the annoying female companion trope. Really they are not cute! To me they just mess up good books . And the fact that they are reoccuring characters makes it even harder for me to get through a read when such a character is in. Second , the " oups! It’s an opportunity for the perverted ones~" trope. Creating situations to sexualize Mc or other characters just doesn’t sit well with me . It’s not funny, it doesn’t sevre the plot , it takes away some of the charisma of the characters... So I just don’t understand the reason why so many authors like this! As of chapter 23 , there had only been two such scenes. But it was enough for me to understand that the author would continue in the same way. Third ,"all the main girls are sexually/romantically interested in Mc "trope. This is the major reason why I'm dropping this . Seeing as they are in the characters sheets , I get that Elizabeth and amelia are proeminent characters in the story. But it’s such a shame that the author made them both interested romantically in the Mc( or is at least headed this way). That’s why whenever I try to read further and I see Elizabeth is involved , I' m just unable to continue because my heart aches at the sight Of the big wasted potential she is. Can’t there ,for once, be a female main character who is not the mc’s love interest but has a great friendship with him? Neo and Elizabeth 's first meeting , ignited this hope in me. But then they went to sit naked in the divine pond and it just showed the author's intentions. It’s not a bad thing . It’s the author 's choice . The problem lies with me so I'm only expressing my feelings so that others with such pet peeves can be fixed on what to and what not to expect. Aside from all that , I still recommend this strongly to anyone the afore stated things do not annoy. And for the author :May God bless your writing journey !

It’s dropping time.😮‍💨

I hope they become friends not lovers . Their relationship would be so wholesome if it were the case.🥹

I really hope he doesnn tget in a romantic relationship with amelia( because she's dense and annoying) or Elizabeth ( because their curent relationship doesn’t need to be romantic. I believe it will be more wholesome if they are just friends or in a mother-son kind of dynamic. Also I don’t like their age gap).