SleepyMao

TLX is s bit arrogant.. But I also do that too, so I can't say much.

Repetitive Description

Does the Author have an obsession with the Word 50,100,etc(insert number) -meter tall when it comes to size? a Short 'Gigantic', 'Enormous', etc would be enough to Describe the height. I'm sorry if this seems like I'm hating but I just want to make my own opinion since the Author has a Repetitive habit

The Author has a bad habit on repeating sentences, I hope the Author learns to fix that. It makes the story feel very Repetitive by writing the same thing too much.

Were

idk make a mask, nose plug with her energy manipulation skill thing

Body*

NOOO ANOTHER 'SLIM BIDY' THERE'S THIN, HOURGLASS BUT I'M GOING INSANE WITH SLIM

YESS I'VE FINALLY FINISHED MY EXAMS NOW I CAN CONTINUE READING ON WHAT I'VE MISSED IN THIS NOVEL, I'M COMING BACKKK 😭

I imagined the beautiful lady, with long black hair, and porcelain skin from afar but when you see her closer her skin is rotting and peeling off under her dress, and a corpse like smell is attached to her. The thin fingers she hid under her sleeves are actually claws that are stained in crimson dried red. When she opens her mouth it'll agape like some sort of viper with teeth attached everywhere inside her mouth, and sunken eyes.