The_4th

Started pretty decent and as an avid Ben 10 fan I was kinda looking forward to it, in less than 10 chapters it became another generic mc with an ai because why not.

This looks to be dropped but I have nothing better to do so I’ll review anyways. The first 5 out of the 6 total chapters are just a poorly written recap of Guy in Naruto and then his fight w Madara. Feels like it took too long, especially since if you’re reading this, odds are you know how the story goes so I would much rather the author have spent more time on the actually new content (in dxd). Grammar is pretty mid with plenty of spelling mistakes and seemingly not a lot of proofreading but it’s readable and really that’s all that matters in this app full of trash. Basically I came here hoping to satisfy a bit of a craving for some more Guy and Eith Gates content and am leaving pretty darn dissatisfied.

Just not very good overall, plenty of misspelled words, bad syntax, and an edgy ahh main character (which I should have expected just from the interaction of serial killer him with the cops tbh). Not criminally bad, just mediocre.

If he doesn’t act like gojo and doesn’t use many of gojos powers, I’m what way is he gojo?

I will not lie, I am not a fan of the “main character loses memories trope” and so in a moment of weakness, I doubted the all mighty corn. I have so far only been proven wrong. I beg for forgiveness and promise it will not happen again.

It doesn’t hit quite as hard since there’s no melody but I think it still did quite well for something mostly focused on music but with no way to actually play it. Although if I may rant a bit it genuinely baffles and hurts me that this is lower in ranking than some random bs like I became an evolving space harem monster. Like how are there so many incredibly successful shitty harem stories on this app. Are we as a collective this pathetic? It’s the reason I can’t tell people I enjoy reading fanfiction and light novels in my spare time, since it feels like stories like those are almost half of all on this platform.

Very mid. Like you could probably find a dozen other stories on this app that follow pretty much the exact same plot. The thing that feels most original is the power system, but even that is really just a generic mana system reskinned. So is it a masterpiece? Definitely not. Is it bat though? Not really. Overall it’s decent to pass the time while waiting for something better to update. Also would prefer the mc had chosen some different elements as they felt much more fun and powerful, but either because of authors preference or just because they would have been too op they weren’t chosen which made me pretty sad (he does address it and say that one of them is the exact opposite of his current element but i feel like that would have been more reason to pick it in order to diversify no? Anyways I digress), but it isn’t really a dealbraker. TLDR: it’s ok but not great or groundbreaking, try it out if you have the time.

Read this a while ago and decided to reread, only now realizing how much of what I remembered was just nostalgia. It’s not necessarily terrible, but a lot of the plot doesn’t make much sense, the mc is just edgy to the point it hurts, and the authors other novel is (imo) much better in basically every way. Only reason I might see myself attempting to finish this again is because I remember this guy shows up in the other novel.

He is just straight up not a villain so that’s false advertising at its finest, please add a harem tag as for some of us that’s pretty much an immediate turn off, and also not as important but what’s the point of him having a system, like it literally just shows up, tells him about powers he has, that he should already know since he recognized his own powers as spider man like (and I feel like it would have been much more fun to see him find out it was Miles’s version through trial and error or maybe in battle rather than just have it pop up in the window as bioelectricity), and doesn’t do anything else. Feels like it was added on just to be able to say it’s a system novel but that’s not even tagged anywhere so I’m mildly baffled.

No feeling quite as annoying as seeing a promising ff and scrolling through the synopsis only to encounter a harem warning. 😞