Artem_5195

The story is very interesting, which deserves 5 stars. I can't judge the grammar, I read through a translator. But if you came to read the comments to decide whether to read or not, then the story is super, you won't regret it.

Damn, I wrote it through a translator and it distorted half the meaning of my comment. In short, the point is that everything was ok before, but in the last chapters, Chinese ego creeps in. But I like the story and a request to the author to record such moments, well, if it's not a joke.

How many chapters of Chinese ego and there was no trace, and here it just went wild: descendants of dragons, their excessive love for grief in which girls themselves impose themselves, the emperor, etc. It seems like they like to show that they are better than others, especially in their novels the plots are different and interesting, but in all of them, as if under a carbon copy, there are certain scenes, plot twists and the hero's behavior. Translator, you can slightly replay such moments, for example, the soul of the descendant of the dragon can be presented as a character and an idea of ​​​​a dragon. Well, the translation is good until the last chapters such moments are unnoticeable. So thanks for the chapter)

Damn, the soul of a dragon's descendant, ahahaha, the Chinese have a lot of self-esteem

I have a question when his son offends the heavens. His father will become the heavens?

У мене питання коли його син образить небеса. Його батько стане небом?

As for me, it would be better to redo the moment with God, everything is too unclear and strange. He immediately understood and accepted everything even before it happened. We need to add details, even small ones, for example, to show why he is stable, just say that in the form of a soul, a person loses emotions and it is easier for him to accept everything. Add more questions to God. Also show the time that he thought for abilities.

As for me, it would be better to redo the moment with God, everything is too unclear and strange. He immediately understood and accepted everything even before it happened. We need to add details, even small ones, for example, to show why he

It can't be Ino.

I think it would be better for first place - 5, for 2nd place - 4, for 3-5 place - 3 chapters. And for 6-10 - 2