BigdaddyKane

I don't think corlys was already a lord in the year stated by the chapter

It has potential. I enjoy the story, but there is a big problem, and that is that there isn't much going on on this 18 chapters that I've red. There is a lot of repetion of same sentences, and overall not a lot of development of the characters. It is written that the Mc changes, but for how the story flows it looks like it happend overnight. And this 18 chapters could have been compressed in 10 chapters. Well, I hope that with the story going on, there will be an improvement. Keep going with your work 💪🏻

Thanks for the chapter. But I can't get enough.

I'm dropping this review only for the author to do a mass release, I will read it after it has 100 chap.

First time review, nothing much to say except this is one of the best, if not the best fanfiction I ever read, it's worth your time.