Gamerul

Disappointment... The MC before reincarnation is a worthless, insecure piece of shit who was afraid to even look at a girl, and after reincarnation, he remains the same loser with a power that is not even his. He hates Issei, without even saying why, although he himself is almost the same as Issei himself, only more arrogant. The world... Well, this is the DxD world, the world of stupid, mostly cardboard characters, there is nothing to say here. I liked that the characters, at least characters like Sirzechs and Serafall, are not too cardboard, judging from a couple of their meetings with MC (which is very unusual both for the work and for fanfics on it), which cannot be said about ordinary extras created simply to "show the coolness and attractiveness of the MC". Alas, I could not read further than chapter 6. A stupid, overly pompous and self-confident MC, and situations that try to highlight the coolness of the MC kill any desire to read.

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The first chapters were read normally, and when I saw that there would be no harem or romance here, I was ready to give 5 stars, but what happened in the end? There is romance. There is also a harem, although indirectly. And MC seemed to be smart at first, but in the end he became a naive fool

In general, the time it takes for a person to feel pain depends on the location of the injury. The time it takes for a pain signal from the hand to reach the brain is approximately 0.1 - 0.2 seconds.

Well, we shouldn’t forget that these are different calls and different animals, which means their rules and procedures are different, perhaps the manda is stronger than the sage of snakes, but most likely, the sage simply doesn’t want to be disturbed by the call, because as he said “ I am not bothered by worldly affairs"

A few chapters earlier you said that the plot would deviate from the canon, but I didn’t notice any special differences from the original, and Itadori became stronger, he began to use Sukuna’s powers earlier than the original, but nothing more. While this seems like just another fanfiction retelling of a story with a stronger main character, I've read a lot of such fanfiction in my time and yours, at least so far, is no different from them. Your main problem is that you are afraid to deviate from the canon, perhaps because you lack imagination or something else. I hope in the future you will keep your word and really change the plot of the jjk world.

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Seriously, level 3? That is, he received level 1 for 2 people, but in 13 years he could only get 3? Rave.

MC is a full retard ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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