ReverendWhite

Chapter 7, still enjoying. Keep up the good work. Enjoyable spread of characters so far.

It's short so far, 4 chapters, 1 a week, but enjoyable. My own criticism is lack of chapters. But that's not a story flaw in any way. The main character is a former immortal, so it jumps right into the meat of the content without the need for too much build up. It has multiple perspectives to flesh out the story world. It doesn't try anything too extreme or cheat-y like some fanfiction do and stays true enough to the story and its world's rules. I look forward to seeing more.