ryu11kaizen

I do like this story a lot, holding a simple and entertaining tale that some will come to enjoy. though i have to say there are some grammatical issues here and there i really did enjoy the characters and their interactions here! you should give this a read if you haven't

hey! this is the author of this book and it hasn't been long since i started writing this book. I really want to say I appreciate all the reviews and support that people have shown, so I want to say thank you to all those who give their time to read this novel I have created! this is more of a qna sections, about the story of course about what may confuse you in the story and ill try to explain to the best of my abilities. hope you come along with me on this journey as i write a cool story fr

i think this is quite a beautiful story with an interesting world to go along with it. the beginning was both impressive and captivating and though there aren't much chapters, i will be here to read and invest myself in these characters! hope to see more chapters in the near future

this story has a pretty solid start, although it doesn't seem like anything out of the ordinary if you read on it really becomes quite entertaining! the novel's leaning towards an overpowered mc trope but i think if done right this can become a good novel, looking forward to more updates!

I enjoyed it immensely despite it being a genre im not exactly familiar with! horror has never been my cup of tea but this was certainly entertaining enough to keep me reading! it really does have potential, hope to see more!!

Reading through the story I do notice there are some errors be it grammar or it just sounding a bit off to me but I do understand that english is not your first language so I have major respect for you for writing a story despite the language barrier. I do think the story is quite entertaining and the plot is certainly promising if developed well! I do think the story would be elevated if you could use perhaps a technique known as show not tell? Instead of being literal, describe what's happening, what the character might be doing which would point the readers in what you're trying to convey. but overall, a novel with potential and i look forward to future updates

yoo big w. thanks for the review bro zonin.