Sharyanna

Thank for compliment ^^

Thanks for the notice ^^

Thank you, I modified it.

I can tell when I read the story I nearly choked to death because I ate my lunch ... So, this is the funniest and hilarious cultivation novel I have ever read. And I want to say I will waiting for the following chapters imaptiently since I'm very interested how will the story and the events lead me.

Well, I can tell after a few chapters that this novel is a well-built and detailed, worth of time masterpiece. Even the genre is a far from me, I still enjoyed it pretty much, I can only recommend! The only thing from my perspective is the story kinda has a slow progress, but this is just my opinion.

I'm not used to writing reviews, however, I try my best. The world and the characters are very interesting, I feel I want to know more about them and want to see their progress with excitement. Overall I found this one very enjoyable! I can recommend it! The only thing that kicked me out of my daze was the grammar mistakes, and not the minor ones. Somehow I felt a word is missing, also I felt a whole sentence missing too.