Not much of a nit-picky reader...sometimes I do write novels..!
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so tell me....did it get better?...because I want to continue but not before I am sure...
Deleted my negative review because this is some good stuff. A really great power fantasy! with op mc.
ahhh...so his 365 dantians are different from his main dantian.....that was confusing to understand XD
hey...author, u did have a good start, some plot holes that were somewhat manageable but now the issues are getting worse...366 or 365? keep a notepad of things to remember while writing a novel pls.
Wait a min.....now that I remember, did he give the twins the treasure that he had got from his quest which would help them in their respective element?
definitely got better...stacking the chapters definitely was worth it...and you did a great job author! keep it up!
I am caught up with the latest chapters and trust me....it's worth it!
damnnnnnnnnnn....never seen before but goddamn!
Because the novel is not bad...it's just not for me, I like action oriented and this does not have much in it.
I bet that shitty princess made a misunderstanding to have them fight.