An_Aspirant

[Writing quality {4} + Stability of updates {5} + Character design {4.2} ]:- As they say 'consistency is the key' and author is indeed consistent whether it's about writing quality, updates or keeping characters in their distinct but pre-established character (pun intended), he has done it right. Characters have certain depth and you will come to appreciate it as story further progress [Story development {4.2} + World background{4} ]:- As of ch170 you can expect a fleshed out story development and world background. ##Real Rating=4.1* [*=if removed stability of update criteria] Criticisms:- While reading it Author will be able to somewhat convince you it was planned and despite not seeing off camera characters they are vital to story's progression but it's true only for star characters, many others are forgotten like that old pen fallen somewhere behind tabe only to be discovered later for plot. All in all this is a good read and has potentially everything which needed to be an awesome book to recommend. And we can see it's very early in the development of story so hopefully in future it actualize its potential

The author wants us to believe MC is very rational because of his past experiences. And to reinforce this logic Author resorts to click baiting steelmanning (Making opponents' argument stronger than they are) MC's arguments and gaslighting (making us question ourselves) readers. Ex. MC will make an absurd decision (generally at the end of chapter) to hook out intest ( like how bad mobile game add's do), then in next chapter MC will explain that decision like a sage and strongmanning himself. If I have to summarize MC's personality, He is like a relic of past who knows what he is not 'a new gadget' but don't know what he can be. This story had potential, specifically till ch80 ish but after that it went downhill, but credit where it's due comedic undertone is good

For webnovel it's a 5☆ •At the start language felt a bit too casual for the GOT time period [but it was good for a training arc so that we can read without thinking too much.] •In the late 180s to 230s, language was unnecessarily complex [there were a lot of wars and strategies involved so it became even more unbearable.] •And after 240 language has been GOOD and engaging so far. In general, it's a 3.8 or close 4.

•Character design and development both are excellent •World development feels deep but coherent [Not every goal is a hole, Don't worry about him being a gigolo, till 450ch only 3+1 partners. ]

Aegons??

The most underrated Novel on this site. [Criminally Underrated] Apart from missing words in some sentences everything is good, it deliver on what it says.

Ch 200 It's a highly underrated novel, no nerfing MC, no weird Grammer, a good story pace. While reading you won't disconnected from the novel. Cons/Pro:- Harem is slow [like really SLOW](dont bash me till you read ch 200, it will become apparent) I like it, and would love to see how it ends [all wars and stuff].

Ch.-94 •Writing quality 4☆ [Pretty good from majority on webnovel, no contradicting himself, no grammatical mistakes] •Stability of updates 5☆ [Everyday 1ch has been constantly updated] • Characters design 4☆ [Not a fair comparison due to it being fanfic but still its good to see how they interact with MC] •World background 4☆ [A very DIVERSE pool of animes] Cons:- Chapters seems short 😕 I'm hopeful for this Story's future 🙌 .

It's a no nonsense story, consistent and logical. World building is good, side characters have a complex background and feels alive. I would like to see more of MC's parents and friends etc in game and MC's life outside of the game world.

Narcissism is only likeable if it's used for Comedy or if it's used for a short period, not like this. Entire premise of this novel is a narcissistic FL And it gets even worse, after some chapters it starts to feel toxic. I tried giving it a chance.