Martin_Fahrenberg

Spoiler : another example supporting the lack of logic : what about the MC's parents ? are they still living their mediocre lives. I'm at chapter 120, still no mention of it.

Entertaining story, writing quality is excellent. But it lacks imagination, development. Also, sometimes, the story lacks logic. Spoiler : for ex, when he buys his mansion, it ie said to come with a fully equipped gym room, but in chapter 120, it isn't even mentioned before the MC goes to a public gym. And that isn't the only thing that lacks logic : the MC passes time with each of his "women", individually. But when he isn't with them anymore, they just seem to disappear : they do not contact him, and their story development is really minor. That is not what somebody in love or interested would do. It seems they don't exist away from the MC.

1:30 is a ratio. it doesn't depend on units. saying that 1s is equal to 30s is the same as saying that 1min is equal to 30mins or 1day to 30 days. Maths :)

I really love this novel, and was always waiting for new chapters. Sadly, the author seems to have dropped it...

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Paris has a diameter of 20km, Tokyo one of 40km (approximation on maps). Also, I think Noah noted in one chapter that there were buildings up to eight floors. So saying that the capital has at least 2 times the population of Tokyo would be true I think, because it has a diameter of 100km. I'm doubtful... In a would that has magic beats and average people are weak... I think it is too big. I love attention to details, but I think few of us readers do, so I don't mind if it's exaggerated for impact. Don't mind this comment Author, I love the novel so far, it is just that I asked myself how big it was compared to our cities today.

It felt a bit weird reading those two chapters with Anna and Jared talking... did not feel like an interaction between persons but of the likes I have in my head, where every response is the one I want. did not feel real. a bit disappointed but it's alright. I think it might be something of personal preference, so please don't take this criticism to heart. I love the novel so far, keep it going !

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule