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This was a good read. Definitely better than the Author's other MHA Fanfic. He has a basic but versatile quirk. Writing Quality: 5/5 It seems like the Author has gotten experience in writing. It's particularly noticeable because there aren't that much 1st Person POVs anymore, unlike in his other MHA Fanfic. The writing is comprehensible with no grammatical mistakes, to my knowledge. Stability of Updates: 4.5/5 The Author took a long break before, but so far, his Update Stability has been good. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is not fast. It isn't particularly slow, either. The story is currently approaching the U.S.J Arc, and I'm excited to see how the Author is going to go about that. Character Design: 4/5 The OCs' designs are great, but for the MC, I think the Author can find a better reference picture for him. World Background: 5/5 Nothing to say there. It's the My Hero Academia World.
No reason? Then what about him literally being in a Hero School, and him aspiring to be a Hero. Bruh. Also, asking if Akira has feelings for Deku since he indirectly helped the kid, is just saying that All Might helps people because he's in love with everyone or All Might helping the kids because he loves kids. Sigh...
... Are you actually expecting someone aspiring to be a Hero, to just stand around the sidelines, when he can literally help others...?
This Fanfic follows the story of Shinji Lee, Subin's twin brother. It's quite fitting actually, since the MC acts quite similarly to Subin lol. Writing Quality is 5. It's a definite improvement from his early chapters in the My Hero Academia Fanfic. Stability of Updates is 5 too. The Author uploads every other day. And that's fine for me. Story Development is 5. The story isn't that fast pased for me, unlike the MHA Fanfic. It shows the Antagonists as well, so it's good. Character Design- is 5. I quite like the character of Shinji and his friends. He's smart (at times), and very expressive. Two of the qualities I like in a character. World background is 4. Eleceed is mostly focused in Korea, so it doesn't really have the best World Background. But, I do like that Shinji is in a new place, not just in Korea all the time. So, I think I'll bump it up to 5. Overall, it's a good read. If you guys like a smart, expressive character, then this is for you. It doesn't just follow the canon right away too. It has a High School Arc, which I'm very excited about. I saw the Author comment once that canon will happen in about 20-30 chapters from now, (which is Chapter 16).
It started off kinda rocky, with the Author speeding through the MC's childhood, but I can look past that. The writing quality is a 4/5. It isn't perfect since there are some tiny plot holes, but it's understandable since the Author stated that he is a beginner writer. The update stability isn't consistent... There are times where the Author would stop posting for 3-4 days, but there are usually reasons for it. The character design, well, you can see the cover, and this is the MHA Fanfic. If you like the characters in MHA show, then you'll like them here too. World Background. Again, it's a MHA Fanfic.