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Finally, a finished FF - even if it's only 1 part, I am satisfied. Thank you, Author-San [img=recommend]

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Based author. If I had extra to donate or throw some power stones I would 👍

I needed this update 7 days ago 💀 Author, I need more, pls

Take a vacation or leave, or something? They are human, you know. It's not like he's literally imprisoned. He could even lie during mission debrief (if he ever took one solo) and say he got trapped for a week or something because he got caught, or suffered from some injury or poison. If there's a will, there's a way.

Hmm. I wonder if MC will take opportunity to visit other villages or areas to nab items... Or people - that works too.

Bruuuuhhhhhhhhhh Why not just scout one of the other super fine chicks in Naruto-verse there's TONS. Karui or Samui aren't that bad! And that's not mentioning visiting other villages, either

Just do what makes you happy man. Doesn't matter what others think unless you're trying to monetize this

Konan? But her hair is more blue, and the age wouldn't line up.. Karui? But she's a redhead.. Don't tell me you're actually going to just drop Yoruichi in the story without context or prior novel tagging 💀

Absolutely shameless. You think I'm some dog or something? You wait 3 months and then ask people to beg you to continue?? Yea, nah.

I liked it. Hit all the 'One Piece' motifs. Ended greatly as well, with plenty of 'twists'. An astonishingly tall order for most fanfics that this one managed to accomplish; and for that, you have my upmost respect, author. Well done!

Looking forward to some Harribel time! & Keep them chaps COMIN'! *My only minor complaint: As many before me have stated; Is the system. Why not just make it an inherent zanpakuto/hollow/genetic ability? Oh, and needs more Yoruichi! Can never have too much of that :P

It was good until the author decided to be cringe and make the MC edgy by introducing bullshit macgiffuns one after the other in an attempt to make the story more interesting. The injustice arc alone was barely palatable, and now he wants to introduce more edgy development in nearly the same exact fashion without pause or relief. I'm calling it quits here, but if you're into the more "dark" things, then have at it, sicko.

This is very nice if you're looking for a quick snack of a story! If you're not super into God of War, and don't mind skimming over some minor irregularities then its honestly not that bad. (At least, up to chapter 20, at the time of this review)

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Please update! I desire more competent Kagua romance! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Yea, the latest chapter is new, thankfully. Hopefully it keeps coming

I have yet to find anything too errant in terms of plot of characters. I didn't really keep track of grammar, but it was good enough for me to not remember it being bad. My only gripe? Please update! 🥲