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Ah, intangibility...
Density shifting? Did he have that? When?
Just transport him before he dies...
Why didnt he give himself POD from DxD ? It can destroy even souls
So, a question? He entered the world in a deserted area to avoid notice, but fist thing he does after entering a city is to fight in broad daylight, without a costume? Why?
So, why did he choose DC? There would have been thousands of other, safer, worlds to start in.
Good point, though, all of this creates a hole in the premise/world building...
The 'Blood' in bloodline disagrees with your statement :) Also if demonic power frequency or whatever is responsible for "bloodline" powers, someone random could, by chance, awaken POD or even the Phenix bloodline. And, also, that way EVERYONE would have some kind of special random 'bloodline'. Genetics are a way better explanation, which would aslo explain mutations in specific bloodlines (Sera for example), and the birth of new ones (Hole - Abaddon i think).
Or try to replicate it...
Ah yeah, im also a big fan of curvious woman :)
Also, Results of the results?
Quite a lot of people actually. Mc has no backing or money, and it the guy he attacked is competent, he could sue and get the mc locked up, even if there was a witness.
That would probably leave his skin pink, not light. Why not come up with something more beliavable? Alergic reaction, sickness or whetever. No he goes with the most stupidest answer possible, like wth?
He should have gotten a mask or something to hide his identity...
Did you write this? It differs from your writing style...
Does that work? Asking for a friend...
Dude, it sometimes took me 8 hours to write and edit 3k words... His system is making it effortless.
Hmm... dxd is played in 2008, the best you could get then was a quad core cpu, so his dual core settup isnt even that bad.
Shouldnt he be British?