KingSalvation

the storu is ok. It would have been amazing if it weren't for the repeating words and robotic interaction. Instead of imagining the people in the story in an adventure setting, i see them in a noble party drinking tea.

he's a SENSOR! trained by a Yamanaka, he would have an excuse if they grew suspicious. The Mc says he's not afraid of Danzo during the genjutsu chapter, but his actions really says otherwise.

he doesn't have to thought. he literally stays at the library most of the time, it won't be a surprise for him to know chakra papers and their purpose.

says the guy who can literally disappear with shunpo

cana: are you my brother?

saying kurama's name out in the open? Lol the tail beast will not be suspicious of your existence. kurama's name is not even in books and been forgotten in time, how can he explain it to kurama?

ohhh~ nasty~ giving him false hope and a little bit of freedom before killing him~

I am a person who give honest review, and most of them are harsh but....This fanfic is actually amazing. At first I was skeptical since this is the first Avatar fanfic I've read, and I have high expectations when it comes to reading, but this surpasses my expectations. The mc is not op and is learning in a realistic phase. The romance is a bit rushed but till acceptable. The mc is embracing the Navi ways but is still keeping his human side. and most importantly, it's not harem (stupid harem, breaking good fanfics) overall, I highly recommend this to readers who likes avatar

pfff

the woman in the first couple chapters, the one harry left his fortune to. it wasn't specific what their relationship is but if i could guess then harry basically adopted the girl? just a theory