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whitecrow2yrRépondu à Ismail_BostanBig differences?? Really? Where? Also the Red Room is a Russian organization, which would definitely not cooperate with Shield, an American organization.
Damn, this is not funny. Aside from the fact that they removed her ovaries and uterus removed from when she was in the RedRoom, she is still partly brainwashed, which may actually explain her loyalty to Shield, they supposedly saved her from the Red Room, but I always thought they were hidden partners with the RedRoom, perfect spies raised from a young age.- whitecrow2yrCommenté
Under her would be a lot more effective and easier..
I rush towards Natasha, as I run I create a portal 3 meters behind her so she won't hear it, the noise we make can mask the noise of the portal that she would have been able to hear. - whitecrow2yrCommenté
From a professional spy to an 8th grader...
The only one who gets to decide such things.. IS ME" - whitecrow2yrCommenté
This is so confusing. Isn't she with Bruce? So why is she asking for a report of the Hulk?!?!?!
"Thor report on the Hulk" Nat calls for Thor - whitecrow2yrCommenté
I get that B is meant for Bruce, but really?
"You know sometimes exactly what I wanna hear isn't exactly what I wanna hear" B - whitecrow2yrCommenté
who smiles at him???
"If you hadn't been there, there would have been double the casualties, my best friend would have been a treasured memory" smiles at him - whitecrow2yrCommenté
Cap shouldn't be able to run at nearly 200km/h. That's wayyy too much considering what the Super Soldier Serum does. It should boost whoever consumes it to nearly superhuman levels, which is pretty much the peak any human could achieve. Now, the people in Marvel/MCU have higher limits than normal, but this is still wayyy too much.
(A/N Cap has around 36 on his base stats, and he can sprint 111.54 mph = 179.5 km/h, found this on the net don't know if it's true, btw Hulk is 70 Tons, around 7000 for each physical stats, for those that forgot) - whitecrow2yrCommenté
this is so questionable...
I don't wanna leave it far away this thing is useful and expensive, I'm just gonna land it on a building with a helipad and go from there. I find one close to the city center and land there. - whitecrow2yrRépondu à Jugo_Seth
RWBY Aura is a washed down version of Nen. It's weaker in any way and has a limit of only 1 Semblance/Hatsu
(I checked, wtf I didn't know this) - whitecrow2yrCommenté
Instead of adding the () as an afterthought, you could've just said, 'While sitting on the toilet, I gulped down the pills.'
Well bottoms up. I gulp down the 2 pills. ( He is in the bathroom btw) - whitecrow2yrCommenté
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hypocrite
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To be fair, training seems to be a foreing concept to Devils as they are beings that grow stronger by simply existing. Like, the only Devil that is shown to actually work on himself is Saiorg, and he did it since he didn't inherit PoW and wished to prove himself. Other than him, everyone else pretty much grew into their powers, including the current Satans, who according to Zekram were pretty much born different than every other Devil.
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watched, watching, watched... your grammar is great, but your vocabulary could use some work. throw in a synonym here and there: looked at, spied, observed, stared, etc.
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injuring??? as in physically harming them? what an interesting class
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feels ---> felt** don't randomly change tenses mid sentence just for one word
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"special action" aka some people looked at him funnily and he got skills for that...
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While he didn't know what's to come, he was really looking forward towards the future***
Hardius is really proud of his son. While he did not know about the future, he was really looking forward to the future. - whitecrow2yrCommenté
method, method, method... again repetition While the practice*** seems weird... He already tried it*** out, he is impressed by his son's newly developed technique/method.
While the method is weird, Hardius must admit that it was working. He already tried this method, and he is impressed by his son's new method. Not only does this technique increase the concentration of the practitioner, but it also increases your control over Demonic Power. - whitecrow2yrCommenté
He then asks ---> asked*** The rest of the sentence should also be in past tense since it's an event that has already happened and the father is reminiscing about it.
After giving him a book explaining how the Demonic Power works, he spent two months reading all of them. He then asks Hardius for permission to use the training ground to train his Demonic Power and Phenex Power.