immortal_0830

thank you , my father has cancer for six months and some days ago he died, but still i try to write.

Yep your story is good, the most what I like most about it is how can you write in such detailhttps://giphy.com/gifs/xT0Cyhi8GCSU91PvtC, you use English in such good way

You have a very good novel, I like how you described everything clearly without leaving anything.

It is so good, everything is in the perfect place, story, or how you introduce your character.

The story is good, word building is good, grammar and spelling, everything is good

Well I have an internship in a company, I am trying to get that job so don't be wary, when I get time I will write and upload.

Look The healing herb he ate first, was only capable of healing little injury or poison.And then he jump from waterfall

Past

Ok

Thank you