Thank you for the increadible story. While it is unfortunate that we won’t get to read the newer arcs, it is also understandable.

I mean, you have a point. But it’s not that bad, we are still reading it after all. If you want to remake it, here are some ideas. Make the colour drain smaller. Like only one country sized. Wait a year after the quirk accident to let her be kidnapped. Or else, it would be suspicious. Her kidnappers think they kidnapped a 4/5 year old, they will either try to be nice or give her pain when she doesn’t listen for the loyalty. And she will likely have a direct ‘parent’ for that, since she is too young to be by herself. As I said, she is 4/5. Even if she had a powerful quirk, she would never be allowed a choice or meet anyone important. As for character development, mc might get a bit more childish over the years, because she can act like a child and it is normal and after the kidnapping turn colder. I’m not quite sure in which direction you wanted to bring the story, but I’m sure it will be good. I personally would have continued reading and If even if you drop or remake it, I hope you still have fun writing things. Btw, don’t worry. I had the same problem with my first story.

Idk compared to experience the torture that is 8mprel down, maybe death is merciful. Well if you ignore that they could escape in a few months time thanks to Luffy.

You‘re right, but I think there would be more than enough people that stopped when they were strong enough and settled down by making money through teaching or medicine. Though their village was certainlytoo small to have someone like that.

I don’t really think that’s much of a problem considering that medicine should be quite advanced with the help of cultivators, which significantly reduces chances of dying that early as most cases of death were illness or war at that time.

I think, that this is the most fitting soundtrack for this scene.

Yeah, I’m not so sure about that either now.

all the people going for tiger... fox is way better

Katsudon

Ebi fries

Oh yeah, my bad. I forgot to put it up since I had it on Wattpad already. It’s up now.

Did I? While I did write about the battle and how I think it would have approximately turned out, I did write it based of the limited information from my research. It basically said on the naruto-fandom, that Shoyo was defeated because of the particle style and Onoki had to retreat due to him being exhausted. I did take a lot of references from that, including Shoyos last words and his abities. Though I was also surprised to find out, that there was ANOTHER one that could use senjutsu from Konoha .

Yo, can I mention Yuna in my Novel? Need an excuse why a character suddenly disappeared and I loved your story quite a bit.

That would make it just more interesting. I mean, if you’ve never seen a phone, wouldn’t you be even more curious about it. And it honestly doesn’t matter, you would buy yourself a Gameboy if there is that one unique game that you can’tget anywhere else.

I understand the need for it, but it's still a huge information dump. Anyway, I enjoy reading this so far, keep it up.l

Shameless Author review here. Since this is my first book, there will be many errors. Be it with plotholes or me changing part of the story months later. Can't be helped, sometimes I can't bear to let some BS I previously wrote stay in the story. However the one thing I'm rather confident in, is the quality of my writing. Stability of Updates is rather well... non existent? I started with uploading twice a week and rotated to uploading once a month 3 times in a row, to me currently uploading every few days because I have some chapters remaining. As noted it is possible that the novel will go without uploading for a year. The novel is rather fast paced, duo to me being really bad at stretching it out but anyway you get the point. What I realised after reading through each of the chapters once again is that even though Cilia is the MC, the story is written more like an introduction to the actual start of the Novel. Though I doubt, that I will ever get that far, my apologies. In my honest opinion, I still don't get how almost 200 people are currently reading this, as there are way better novels out there, but I'm still happy you decided to give it a try. One thing I will promise is, that the moment I decide, that I won't continue with the story while being in the middle of something, is the time I will write about how the story would have approximately finished, just on a much smaller scale. I do hope you enjoy reading my work and feel free to bombard me with questions, Ideas or complains you may have. I got enough time for all of it. You can hurl questions at me even a year from now on, it doesn't really matter.

I'll try but realistically speaking it will probably be around a 5/10.