it should be 1 tails and nine tails considering they shouldn't know there true name

should be dollers

jonin

special superior ninja is special jonin superior ninja is jonin

supposed to say 75

if u want to make money make a novel not a fanfic and then ask people for money to read it

oh... where does it say oddish since its always meant to be bulbasaur

its a website mtlnovel.com and it's there

u need to make the charectors more genuine they just don't act like a human u should try and not make all of his subordinates really loyal since I was expecting sum betrayal u should also work on the romance aspect

what's the raw 🤔

don't worry I found out why I couldn't access chapter 1

good work overall author 👌 but it seems that I can only access chapter 168 and above can't read from chapter 1

it's not unreadable...u can read it so its not unreadable.

supposed to say tail left

but that still ruins the plot alot considering the originals was about alot of different challenges they faced if there only going to face 1 big bad guy what's the point?

I just changed it thanks

I fixed it thx

yes I might miss a few but it's supposed to be changed to pokemon

can u point out which chapters it says elves instead of pokemon 🤔 I might miss some that's why I hope someone will point it out to me

ok I know how u feel aswell most Chinese fics are like that tho