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I agree it's just too much extra complicated... writing style have too much extras... in university we called this type of people oversmart...

Bruh are all here bots or wht .... I have read more thn 1k novels ... but not a single one have this much complication .. I got it u wanna make it unique but it's just too much extra complications

Bruh r u still alive??

Please improve ur style 🥲🥲🥲so much pain im suffering due over extra info in extra pov novel🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲

Bruh thats a pastor

Every thing is good except the way stretch a simple chapter into a complicated one.... bruh I got it that u want a goof world build, but it's just too much man u just gives info of 1 villain for 2 chapters n in third chapter he'll just die!! What is the freaking reason is there to give so much elaborate character, it's not even helping in world building, it just make it really boring, a simple 3 chapter arc is stretch out to 30 chapters just because of some nonsense, and what the freak is DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DI E DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE 30X what is this bruh ... just fill up the pages u do this isn't is too greedy of you

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I hate u ... u know u focus too much of world background n stray away from the main plot. I have read ur 3 books n all have to much filler chapter. man u r a pervert. why the u do this

Bro u r wrong, because the name of tht chapters is legendary rank😂😂.. it's a error made by author... he forgot tht fog was already legendary rnk