This story is amazing!!! Chapter one sucked me in!! What an absolutely engaging world and fantastic storytelling! Keep up the great work!! I can’t wait to see what will happen next!

I really love this story!! It’s amazingly written and absolutely engaging!!! I can’t wait to see where this story goes!!!

I honestly thought this story was pretty captivating from the start!! Amazing job!! I can't wait to read more of your story and hope you continue to write it!