Dexter007

even if he was a former human he should at least be more prideful and arrogant in game of thrones world i mean he revived someone and they are acting arrogant on him

i think there is no need for mc to not kill Vegeta just because he was shown to have changed in original doesn't mean he is good if they were not more powerful then Vegeta than you know what would happen this is mc real life not every villain will turn good while Vegeta has potential from the way you have shown the mc growth I don't think he should take risk with his strength still not being absolute

this story has great potential it's background is almost perfect but i hope you won't make the mc do ridiculous things such as hurting Sasuke cruelly for negative points i think Sasuke as a girl is the best possible wife for both this and original Naruto I have read that Sasuke was originally considered as a female character and wife for naruto anyway i hope that you won't have Naruto be a slave to system like others mc he already has one of the best potential and bloodline for becoming the strongest in Naruto world

if you are like other author i bet Luffy will somehow awaken gear 5 and whether defeat Hancock or escape with few people if that is not the case then maybe somehow with magic dragon shanks or garp come to rescue then on time

actually the creator of izanami name is Kaori not jiri

nice npc i would have thought that the mc will create npc of his favourite female character and also can you please add Raiden shogun from genshin impact as npc

can you make the mc dragon form like gidoriah

I hope you won't have them somehow win or escape through some plot armour

for a godslayer to be reduced to getting insulted by a high class devil and just say that he is looking for an excuse when he is the leader of the three faction I am just dropping this story if you wanted to keep the plot as it is then just say so because even with all that power he is still following the plot just with some extra dialougue

good chapter and story I like the mc thinking about strong people and on his second chnance in life unlike some other mc who constantly worry about changing the so called plot and caring to much about characters opin ions just because they saw them on tv