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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole10h
    Commenté

    aside for getting stronger there is no diffrence in this story or the orignal even mc behaviour is the same

    Ch 1 Tempest military force, Kingdom of Ingrassia and meetings children{edited}
    IN TENSURA WITH OP SKILLS
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Sandesh_Belbase
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole3d
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    is he really a reincarnated person he should know that keeping the protagonist alive when they are your enemy will definitely backfire on you

    Ch 30 Chapter 30: Ten-Year Soul Ring?
    Douluo V: Marrying to Become a God
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Betek
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole6d
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    Oh come on dispite mc having power nothing change if you don't want to change the original plot then at least write it on the description of the novel so i wouldn't waste time

    Ch 20 Xebec
    One Piece: Hashirama
    Autres · theusual
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole8d
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    while the background is good and the powers given are also excellent you should be consistent in the knowledge and power of the mc and it is good that you let mc retain the memory of the naruto anime

    Ch 12 Chapter 12
    Naruto: Reborn As The Only Uchiha-Senju
    Anime et bandes dessinées · UchihaIzuna
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole11d
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    this is an excellent story it would make it even better if you give a skill like maximum conquer haki to the mc etc when the rebellion starts

    Ch 176 Chapter 176
    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Zaelum
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole19d
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    Honestly this fanfic world background is the best among many novel i have read for naruto or otherwise but you should let the mc to keep retaining his full memories about naruto otherwise what's the point of reincarnation

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    Naruto: Reborn As The Only Uchiha-Senju
    Anime et bandes dessinées · UchihaIzuna
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole20d
    Répondu à Aaron_Chong_6689

    well he could kill danzo and take the jutsu,hashirama cell etc i am not saying he has to change the plot but he shouldn't just focus on the main characters how good they are or overall helping them by changing their genetics etcc

    RE: Black-Light
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole21d
    Répondu à Aaron_Chong_6689

    Well the mc hold himself back from changing the plot i mean look at the chapter in which kurenea was tortured by orochimaro and he didn't did anything to him because he just know that he will turn good in the original plot but the world is real for him like kurenea was not captured by orochi in the original but was captured in this story

    RE: Black-Light
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole22d
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    this story is excellent but i think the battle between everyone who fight mc is exaturated i mean the people of naruto do not have the vitality to withstand tha beating and injuries that mc gives to his opponents

    Naruto Law of the Devil
    Anime et bandes dessinées · DemonWriter
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole23d
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    The story background is good but the Mc is obsessed with keeping the plot the same and not changing it

    RE: Black-Light
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole25d
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    the story is better than some i read but i don't get it why is naruto the same as before and don't hate the village.

    Naruto-SoulFusion
    Anime et bandes dessinées · The_SaadKhan
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1mth
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    and please don't involve sakura

    Ch 4 Quick Poll of Sasuke's Future Lover(s)
    The Greatest Shinobi [Sasuke SI]
    Anime et bandes dessinées · One_Salvation
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1mth
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    have naruto genderbent

    Ch 4 Quick Poll of Sasuke's Future Lover(s)
    The Greatest Shinobi [Sasuke SI]
    Anime et bandes dessinées · One_Salvation
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1mth
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    good chapter but please don't have him revive the enemies he killed then just say that thanks for the fun

    Ch 139 Showdown
    Marvel : Godly Lottery System
    Films · Lord_Immortal_0170
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole2mth
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    why make him op when he can't even kill someone trying to kill him and his mother does he not have a dragon bloodline?

    Ch 31 Chapter 31 Confronting Tang Hao.
    I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Chaotic_Sovereign
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole9mth
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    mc is getting to arrogant and is still treating the world as a game that he play

    Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
    Livres et littérature · Se7en
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
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    why are you making the mc as simp for hermione there are much better characters than her you are just making mc plot follower

    Harry Potter : God of magic system
    Fantaisie · Star_monarch
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
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    mc should have at least somewhat numb emotion or detached from the world after spending so many years in the void all alone but he is actiong like a fanboy who meet his crush

    Highschool DxD: The Ultimate
    Anime et bandes dessinées · NinjaKilla
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
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    this mc is boring and coward without an ambition 👎👎🤮

    Multiversal: The Shop
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Charlottes
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
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    harem is ok but please don't add to much devil girl or rias peerage

    Ch 16 Meeting The In-Laws.(Edited)
    The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · God_Of_Wolves
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