very good ...

the story is really cool. make the reader feel at home for a long time reading your story. plot twists, neat writing, and all very good. Spirit

it's already locked in this chapter...

Next thurr....

the story is really cool sis.. excited to update... but the writing

Semnagt cintakuhhhh

I stopped by your work, the quality of the writing is good, the development of the story is difficult, the characters are strong, the writing is neat, I like it. Keep your spirits up

hi, i'm here. wow this story is really cool bro. the fantasy can,, cheer up

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the story is interesting, beautiful sister, the writing is very neat, it must be very exciting to tell stories about history. all cool in my opinion. spirit

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thnks kak ...

The character design is very good, sis.. I like the storyline, it's cool. story development is also good. neat writing i like.. spirit ya...

ya kak..silahkan lnjut .

seru apanya kK... sedih iya .. huhuhu

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ifih .sayg sekali mbak Marsha .tamu mu menghancurkan dunia kang Danish

cieeeee .ehem2 ... yuk gas pak Danish

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makin seru .... si Danish emng pria edan