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Old_Beard

Old_Beard

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2021-12-18 JointGlobal
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Commenté

    It's clean and nice chapter!

    Ch 8 CHAPTER 8 - MY GREAT-GRANDPA IS A HIDEOUS MAN
    BROTHERS IN MAGICAL WORLD
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Posté

    Change the tittle? Seems the chapter story still the same, waiting for the new update. Keep up the good work bro, keep going and good luck. There still time to explore.

    BROTHERS IN MAGICAL WORLD
    Fantaisie · Leisco
    detail
  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Commenté

    Lovely, brother always there for his own brother

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 - The hard headed-bull is a Nyctophobic
    Dunya - Maria Guardian Angel
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Commenté

    Hahahaha.. someone does need some smack to get on his senses

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 - The bull needs injection at least two times
    Dunya - Maria Guardian Angel
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Commenté

    Get better, keep going

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 - It's hard to be a big brother!
    Dunya - Maria Guardian Angel
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Commenté

    Keep going!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Maria's two guardian angel
    Dunya - Maria Guardian Angel
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Posté

    I laugh out loud on there... Thanks for the laugh, the story kind of cute so far, hope next one got more of action. Keep the good work bro and kill some pig

    Dunya - Maria Guardian Angel
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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  • Old_Beard
    Old_Beard2yr
    Posté

    The story good enough for now, though the sfx words sometimes cringe me out. And the cripple thingy in the tittle, I don't really get I yet. Overall worth try

    Cripple Ages
    Fantaisie · Leisco
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