sm_yesa
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sm_yesa6 months agoReplied to Lachgarwhat do you mean by japanese girl?
- sm_yesa6 months agoReplied to Lachgar
why? you don't like drama? do you hate Takumi? why😭
- sm_yesa7 months agoCommented
Kira scene
- sm_yesa7 months agoReplied to Brogden_Cotton
thanks for reading my work, hope you stick around till the end😊
- sm_yesa2 years agoCommented
if you're wondering abou what happened to Naruki and Matsuki after meeting Korosaku lee, I think I'll put it in the next chapter, that's what I plan to, but if you think is weird after I release it, please reach out to me so I can ask my editor to help me figure it out
- sm_yesa2 years agoCommented
you're right, even I is having a hard time how to brought things up, I'm sorry to disappoint you, it's my first time to really write with the intention of finishing it asap but sometimes I make mistakes because of rush. Please forgive to your useless author.
- sm_yesa2 years agoPosted
This work is quite good, reading it is not a waste of time, though I must say there are some uninteresting part like any other nobels out there. The writing style is fine but could be better by making it more gripping. Overall it's good ! Keep up the good work fellows !!
- sm_yesa2 years agoPosted
This one gave me goosebumps, as i read your work with imaginations my heart began to throb really fast, I was having a mix feeling of excitement and nervousness. I'm not into horror/thriller but I will not be bias, this book is good, the quality of writing attract my attention, though. there are some mistakes from time to time. It's alluring and exciting as I proceed with the chapters. Hope this would be done well. It's good!!!
- sm_yesa2 years agoPosted
Ok here's my two cents h quality of writing and grammar is good, but there's something I am not satisfied, and that is just suddenly dropping the information traits and details in an unattractive way, i think it can be improved more how it was delivered. The story is engaging as I wonder how the story will go. Overall it's good. Keep up the good work, you can do it fellows!
- sm_yesa2 years agoPosted
I'm not into BL but I endured and read it, well, what can I ssay, it's good. Here's some of my comments. I'm not into third POV but how the story was delivered is good, the quality of writing and grammar is also satisfying , what only needs to be improved is the quality of feelings of characters, making it more relatable I think will do the trick, whatever you may come up is fine. Keep up the good work
