Dissecting551

Bro, this story has been in the public domain for 2 years now on Russian-language platforms. All 200-odd goavs have been open for a long time. What revival are you talking about?

Hello! The original is on Russian-language sites, to find it you just need to Google this - Фанфик по Аватар: Легенда об Аанге / Покорение стихий

Another translation of a Russian-language fanfic without indicating the original source. How boring of you, lol. 1 star until the original source is indicated. Have a good day! :)

This is a translation and not the original work of the author. Since I don’t see a link to the original author, I give it 1 star automatically. Have a good day)

This is a translation and not the original work of the author. Since I don’t see a link to the original author, I give it 1 star automatically. Have a good day)

This is a translation and not the original work of the author. Since I don’t see a link to the original author, I give it 1 star automatically. Have a good day)

The chapter, like the fanfic itself, is beautiful and interesting. But one chapter a month is really disappointing

But the Russians were not pagans at that time. They also believed in Christ. It’s just that their faith is Orthodoxy, not Catholicism. So calling Novgorodians pagans is simply nonsense. You don’t call Byzantium, the Eastern Roman Empire a pagan state :/

At the time of writing this review, I have read all the available chapters and can give a brief summary. The story is written in good language, making it a pleasure to read even through Google Translator. At the moment, only a small part of the Naruto world is included in the story - the academy and the Hyuga clan, but they are written well, the characters have their own personalities and goals, they are not extras for the main character. The only thing that confuses us at the moment is the question - is everything that is happening reality or is it an illusion? I understand that this may be the author's intention, the secret of his fanfic. But, honestly, this very concept, the possibility that everything that is happening is just an illusion of Madara-kun, puts me off reading But overall, the story is interesting and has potential; it’s worth spending your time on. Author, keep writing, you're doing great :) Google translator

I will briefly describe this fanfic so that its low rating is clear. This is another novel about a person from our world getting caught up in a villain/minor character/NPC from a book/game that the MC read/played. The idea is not original, but it is still interesting when executed well. So, this work is not that case. Literally, the main character has neither character nor any story, he is bored in his reality before getting caught, since he cannot find a worthy opponent and feel alive again The author decided to make him a combat maniac who is not interested in anything else - Okay, so be it. But after the rebirth, the fun part begins - the body into which the MC moves is the body of a typical aristocratic villain who has no skills and who leads the life of a vegetable. But suddenly he develops amazing skills and behaves completely differently. And no one cares about this - he has matured, hid his skills. This is what the butler says, who has been looking after him all his life, and even his father. Imagine that your brother or relative suddenly began to demonstrate something that he had never been able to do. Will you say everything is ok? Talent? Or maybe he managed, living in a closed family society, to hide his strength? I admit that things might get better, but I really doubt it. Author, work on your skills, think through your work before publishing it. Google Translate