Just a 19 year old that read and write FFs of anything that interests him.
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Aight, cheers mate.
To be honest with you, there isn't much to say about it. Starting with the MC dying is somehow a give a way for reincarnation, I followed this story expecting a sort of intriguing war between brothers and the struggle to catch up to him along the line. But now that I see where it is going, meh idk.
but being reincarnated into a jonin already without going through the process of character growth is lazy writing in and on itself.
Well, no, it wouldn't be bad if it was written with reason and a good storyline behind it. If it is reincarnation, I would guess it would be another one of those marry sue ff's. but for reanimation in the war, he needs to have significance beforehand, where the reader already followed his feats. his fame. his struggles. to be able to feel excited about this prospect.
yeah, that's why I said that, isn't he the MC?
surviving 4 swords is highly unlikely so that's why I said that
good god... not a femboy hinata
I see a lot of f*ckd up fanfic when the characters knows everything, but the other side where the mc doesn't know at all tends to be really good. Anyway, want someone that knows well and write well? take a look at "the outsider's resolve" it's a gem. been following it for a year now.